I see you come alive
Posted on: February 6, 2011
We could be on the phone,
Or I reading our previous chats alone,
the way you look at me from your photo.
My heart starts running wild,
I just can’t help but smile,
Maybe its the way you live it up
Baby its all in your style,
Because for that while
I see you come alive.
12 Responses to "I see you come alive"
February 9, 2011 at 5:02 am
nice..
are you in love or smthing ?? or someone dumped u or smthing like that ..huunn ??
Seems smthing is up .. isn’t it ? 😉
February 9, 2011 at 12:52 pm
I am not in love. I never got dumped or heart-broken. I’m just a hopeless romantic! 🙂
February 23, 2011 at 10:48 am
Nice man. Short, sweet and conveys a whole idea, I like it!
March 31, 2011 at 6:17 pm
Wonderful.
U might be knowing it, but I need to tell u that, after mastering prose, u r acquiring skills in poetry writing too. Keep writing.
thoughts within me 
February 7, 2011 at 12:53 pm
second paragraph is classic 🙂
February 9, 2011 at 12:54 pm
😀 😀 😀 I got this idea when one of the Toastmasters, Mr. Alfred talked about ‘come alive’, as in living life to the fullest. This phrase, ‘come alive’ got stuck in my head and in a few hours I wrote this! 🙂