thoughts within me

Your sweet smile

Posted on: October 24, 2011

O dear, your sweet smile
makes me wonder for a while
what do i like about it
as i start to dissect its image,
in my head, bit by bit.

is it the curvature of your lips
or neatly aligned teeth
what is it that makes it look so hip?
is it your eyes that lit up as well
or your face that glows
perhaps its your happiness that shows.


1 Response to "Your sweet smile"

Good job. šŸ™‚ but u know what i think

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