thoughts within me

humble dumble

Posted on: July 14, 2011

humble dumble,
who so much fumbles,
and nimbles when he eats,
he races with time,
his work remains as jumbles,
when no one’s looking he sometimes cheats.

humble dumble,
who so often stumbles,
yet is known for so many feats,
he rhythms and rhymes,
as his melody he mumbles,
he claps his tune and forms beats from his feet.

humble dumble,
who so can too grumble,
but when you want he can be so sweet,
he expresses his affection,
lift you as you fall and tumble,
watch out for this man whom you may accidentally meet.


5 Responses to "humble dumble"

and d HUMPTY DUMPTY described in d above amazin set of lines is YOU,WITHOUT ANY DOUBT 🙂

rhythmic poem nice to read…
keep writing & smiling always….:)

Didn’t like it that much 😦

Nice one Sainani! 🙂

Thank you Taskeen !! 🙂 🙂

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