thoughts within me

I want her to be mine

Posted on: January 28, 2011

Why is it wrong to be possessive in love
who says it’s a crime?
I only want her to be happy
but more than that
I want her to be mine.

I may live my whole life
dreaming of her
To her I may not be the best
that life has to offer
This feeling of love makes me high
I care too much to lie
and I promise I won’t cross the line

I only want her to be happy
but more than that
I want her to be mine.

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10 Responses to "I want her to be mine"

awesome one..

Thanks Dhingra 🙂

good one , would have liked more if it was a little bigger and developed the idea more.
the lines

This feeling makes me high
I care too much to lie

Seems to state that the feeling of u being not the best makes she can get makes u feel high ? IS that so ?

Made the change… will expand it later.

Very nice poem, Champ. It was a poem. Wasn’t it?

I could be a song actually! 🙂
And thank you, Rahul. 😉 I’d have liked if you’d written your name. 🙂

agreed. Whatever people say, that’s the deepest desire of anyone who loves!

Abhe, masth he, copying this one.

Boy, Its a masterpiece.
make it longer 1-2 stanzas more! Ye dil maange more 🙂

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