thoughts within me

Nothing will please me better

Posted on: December 22, 2009

Nothing will please me better
than to keep you happy,
nothing will please me more
than to see you smile,
I love it when I love you
like there was no tomorrow,
and to be there for you,
all the while…

If there’s something bothering you,
making you sick and sad inside,
let me know,
you can always count on me,
if you have something in your mind,
just say so,
you know I care so much about you,
you mean a lot to me,

Nothing will please me better
than to keep you happy,
nothing will please me more
than to see you smile,
I love it when I love you
like there was no tomorrow,
and to be there for you,
all the while…

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4 Responses to "Nothing will please me better"

hmm first a love story now a romantic poem , what’s going on ?:)

acc. to me first and last paras were fab
Nice job πŸ™‚

ohhhhhhhhhhh
i did not notice that first and last paras were same….
that means only one para of ur poem is good…..
rest is alright πŸ˜›

this is 3rd time I’m reading it..n as I told you before .. it’s awesome πŸ™‚

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